Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Conclusion

Going over the blogs that I have written, I have come to realize that when I write I tend to write about things that I can relate to. Within every post that has thus far been posted by me, I can find some deeper meaning that ties in with the story of my life. Whether it be through something that I found resembles me through a piece of literature, or a random topic that I was lead to with Mrs. Gilman's instructions. This blog has all truly been about who I truly am, the opinions and feelings that I have toward people, writing, books, etc. I looked back through all my post's and saw just how my writing has changed and improved, yet it has stayed the same. In the sense that it is still clearly me, throughout the year I still have made it possible to stay true to who I am by finding meaning that relates to me within everything. I learned about myself that probably like most people, I like to write about things that I've experiences. For example the blog where we got to write about our first childhood memories. Writing about things that interest you, writing about something that is known by you to be a fact is easier and more interesting than writing about something like a book or poem, that could have many meanings. Even though having to discover and prove what you believe to be true may be more interesting. I believe that not only writing personal things that are filled with imagery and emotion, but reading them is something that people would much rather want to do. Another blog that was a personal favorite of mine to write was the blog that we got to describe our best friends. Looking back, the way that I wrote wasn't as well formed, and basically not as good as it is now. Rereading it I caught my mistakes right away, and got a little bit frustrated with myself for two reasons. The fact that I had made those mistakes, and the fact that I now, months later want to go back and rewrite it so it sounds better. Over the course of this year I have written a lot about books and plays that were being read during class, I have written about essays, and questions that I may have had at the time of reading the books and plays. I do wish that there would have been more opportunities to write about things freely, like the things that I talked about above. I feel like we spent a lot of time focused on something completely set up. Writing about something that only had one category to fall under. Looking back, I wish now that we would have been able to write more freely about things that interested us. May I suggest that in the future you throw in more open ended blog subjects? Some people, like me, really enjoy writing about things more freely. I personally don't like feeling so tied down, that is something that is emphasized in essays. That is the conclusion, to this seemingly endless blog.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Essay Writing

I feel that my essay writing abilities have gone from a five on a one to ten scale to a now maybe eight and a half or nine. Throughout the year I have learned a lot about writing a good essay. As far as literary analysis goes, I believe that I know what's going on. I think literary analysis is extremely beneficial when writing a paper of a novel or play. It helps you to thoroughly understand what your reading and why its important, or relevant.
I feel like my essay as is doesn't have a very strong conclusion, or very good three fold transition sentences. What I have written is good, but could definitely improve, which I plan on doing this weekend with the extension that Mrs. Gilman has given the class to make it better. I think that at this point my paper is only a B grade.

Friday, May 14, 2010

Summer reading list

For my summer reading list there are two specific books that I have heard good things about, the first book is My Sister's keeper by Jodi Picoult. The book was recommended to me by Nikki Herbison, she said that even though it's very sad it's a great read. Another book that is on my summer reading list is The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins. It was recommended by three of my friends that don't necessarily like to read but said that it was a great book.

Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Culture Shock

Taylor Swift's song "Love Story" is all about being in love and has direct references to the play "Romeo and Juliet" In the beginning of the song Taylor sings about how she is Juliet and the person she "in love" with is Romeo. She starts with "I'm standing there, On a balcony in summer air, See the lights, See the Party, the ball gowns," These lyrics are in direct reference to the play. In the play there is a party and Romeo goes beneath Juliet's window/balcony and they talk. References to Shakespeare's "Romeo and Juliet" is used all over still; in many different ways, most of the time showing "love".

Sunday, April 11, 2010

Extra Credit Blog

I suppose that when I started in Honors English in the beginning of the year, I thought that it was going to be a piece of cake, I'd done very well in my English classes all the years before freshman year. I was set, and confident. I'd never anticipated that I would be needing to memorize and recite poetry in front of the class though, speaking in front of the class is a weakness for me, nerves over power my ability to function. Oh boy, then we have diagramming sentences... well, I don't have very nice things to say about this topic. I think that diagramming sentences is no fun at all and it takes a long time, knowing where to put certain words off straight lines, dashed lines, or weird looking lines is not easy. I must say, that just flies right over my head. All in all, I think that I've learned a lot from Honors English, and I'm glad to have taken this class. Just not so glad that I had to read the novel Great Expectations (I would underline the title but I can't figure out how, bear with me) in my opinion that book was really boring and hard to get through. How to Kill a Mockingbird (yet again, bear with me) was a better book, and one that I liked.

Friday, March 26, 2010

G.E. Skit Prep

The first idea for a skit that I have is, the part in the book where Pip is walking on the Street and Trabb's boy comes frolicking along. I think that it would make a good short skit, because it would be entertaining and fun for the not only the people watching but for the people acting it out also. My second idea is where Miss Havisham catches fire and Pip tries to slap the fire off of her, i think this would be a good thing to perform because watching people flail around pretending to be on fire is something that I personally would start laughing quite hard at. Finally the last part of the book that I think would make a good skit is when Pip first meets Miss Havisham in her dark and desolate home, with her bride's dress still on and the clocks all stopped at the same time. This scene would be interesting to see how the actors would interpret it.

Thursday, March 18, 2010

Questions about Great Expectations

I guess one of the things that I didn't really understand in this chapter was in chapter 44 on page 387 in my book. What i don't understand is why is Pip asking Miss Havisham to pay the rest of the money needed for Herbert? I understand that he is trying to help make things right between Mathew Pocket and his family, and help her understand that they are not like the Pockets lurk around Miss Havishams house. But I'm not sure why he is trying to get her to pay for Herbert's Business.

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Great Expectations: questions about a passage

One thing that I am not to certain about in this weeks reading is when Pip is having dinner at Mr. Jaggers house and Mr. Jaggers brings his house keeper, Molly over to show everyone her wrists. "'I'll show you a wrist. Molly, let them see your wrist.' . . . The last wrist was much disfigured - deeply scarred and scarred across and across." (chpt. 26 pg. 228) I don't really understand what the point in showing everyone her wrist's was, or why Mr. Jaggers is referring her scarred wrists to something of strength.

My Question is: Why would Mr. Jaggers refer to strength as his house keeper, Molly's deeply scarred wrist's, and what is the significance in the story?


Friday, February 26, 2010

Great Expectations

In the book Great Expections, the quote "Pause you who read this, and think for a moment of the long chain of iron or gold, of thorns or flowers, that would never have bound you, but for the formation of the first link on one memorable day." Pip is referring to the lie that he had just told to his uncle, his sister, and to Joe. He told the lie to protect Miss. Havisham, and Estella from the humiliation and judgement of society. The day altered Pip by the lies that he had told, and the guilt that he would have to live with. Pip has developed into a more mature character, he is starting to understand social classes in his community, where he falls in those classes, and understanding that he doesn't want to be a poorer class, he want's to be something that Estella would want "worthy" of her. This day is memorable to Pip, because he is becoming more self aware, and has developed him as a character by showing that he is growing up and becoming more mature in the way that he thinks.

The event that began the sculpture of who i would become was meeting a little girl named Tylee. Tylee was a little girl that had cancer that i am proud to say had worked her way into the hearts of my family and I. The day that Tylee died was the day that I actually realized that life and death go hand in hand. No matter how young or old you are, no one is invincible. I think that the entire experience made me mature a great deal, I think that being able to understand that accidents happen and people die turned me into a more careful person. Someone who is cautious but can still have fun. I believe that was the first link in the chain that has created who i am today.

Sunday, February 14, 2010

The Importance Of Being Earnest: Group essay

The three main points that i'm going to be talking about in my body paragraph are specific points in the book that show how strong relationships can make it through tough problems together. My three concrete details are 1. When Gwendolen finds out that Jack had been lying to her all along about his name being Earnest. 2. When Cecily and Gwendolen are "fighting" over who is marrying Earnest. 3. When lady Bracknell is saying that Jack and Gwendolen will never be married. The commentary that I have chosen is helping to make it obvious that only a strong relationship could make it through all the lies and confusion that the couple (Jack and Gwendolen) have had to go through. My commentary helps to show that not all people would be able to forgive someone for lying to them about what their name is, because they wouldn't know if anything else they had said was true or not. Which proves that only a truly concrete relationship could pull through a lie so large. My commentary also helps to prove the thesis because after hearing that a parent doesn't approve of someones engagement, and at the time the couple needing consent, most people would have given up and tried to find another; Yet Gwendolen and Jack keep trying and find a way to try and get Lady Bracknell to give her consent, which shows the couple overcoming more obstacles.

Friday, January 29, 2010

The Importance of Being Earnest

By doing the research on the victorian era, it helped to enhance my understanding of the time period, which in turn helped and is still helping me to understand the play more than I dwould have had I not had some back round information about the time period. I found out things about the time period from information on the social classes to facts about the period and the things that were occuring during the time.
I learned from doing the research how it was determined what social a class a person would be in. I had learned that you were born into a certain class depending on how much money you had and what social class your parents fell into. Women could move up and down in classes by marriage, and men by becoming more wealthy or becoming friends with people in higher classes. this relates to the play because maraige is something that is greatly satirized but something that is also taken seriously. Especially by Lady Bracknell who is determined her daughter marry into a higher standing social class, and Gwendolen makes fun of it stating that she may marry often and many times. This is both funny and serious because that would mean her husbands had died, and it's serious because who she married meant everything, who she would be, how she would live, if she would live in comfort. There were many other examples of things that I had researched in my victorian research that were also brought into the play; Including the education of the time. I had learned from doing my researh prior to reading the play that to go to school you had to have money. The more money you had the better education you had. If you had alot of money then you could go to a private school or have a tutor. This relates to the play, because Cecily has a tutor or a governess who educated her. Cecily is the ward of Mr. Worthing, who is a wealthy man, but Cecily herself is also very wealthy, because she had alot of money she was able to pay for a tutor to educate her which was one of the best educations that you could get at the time. Both of these are examples that show that what I learned from doing the victorian era research helped me in understanding the book better.